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Feelings Inside

I wanna get away
I wanna fly so high
Just to get away
From the feelings inside of me

You made me feel alive
every time that you were around
Now your gone
I just don’t know what to do

When I was with you
You always knew
Just what to do
You’d lend me your shoulder
What i was going through

To whip away my fears
There was always you
You made me see
The best in the worst

For you’re the best

How much I want you back
You shall never know

I still love you
As you will always know
Please come back
As for you and I
Are still one
— JamieLehmann, Jan 07, 2010

Critiques

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destiny

16 years 6 months ago

intresting i like what your

intresting i like what your trying to get across try using just a little less unimportant words maybe try and make it flow more easily

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