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Turn

Drops of white and black turn to gray.
Gray is the color of forgotten dreams.
Dreams bring forth silent memories.
Memories remind of hopeful days.
Days as clear as blue sky.
Sky turns to a cold hard gray.
— destiny, Apr 19, 2010

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Region, Country: Maryland, USA

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DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

Hi Destiny, I recommend

Hi Destiny, I recommend extending your ending. The switch seems abrupt, not as natural as it could end. Ya know what I mean? I hope so. Good write, thanks for sharing. Julie D.D.

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