Sinthya

May 16, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

What you say

you say i am beautiful,
but never take me out.
You say I love you,
but what is love.
happiness,
pain,
heartbreak.
the way i feel never matters.
But you still repeat,
your beautiful,I love you.

— Sinthya, May 16, 2010

About the Author

Country/Region: New York

Favorite Poets: I cant really say i have a favorite!

Critiques

Alice Ember

16 years 2 months ago

You okay honey?

Are you okay hon? Lovely write it has pain and very strong emotions. I'll check with you at school tomorrow. Stay safe love yah Alice Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to

destiny

16 years 2 months ago

I like this and I have heard

I like this and I have heard people say these things in wonderment as they question the words said to them . I like it.

Sinthya

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks

thank you. may feelings dont come out when i say them so when i write things they show.

DawningDaytripper

16 years 2 months ago

Doesn’t much sound like

Doesn't much sound like real love, of coarse that is for you to feel out. I just hope you don't let him keep causing pain with out seeing the damage that can be done. Good write. Julie D.D.

lou

16 years 2 months ago

I Know

Hi I know the feeling Lou

Sinthya

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks

thanks for the like. i will right more

t. reflexion

16 years 2 months ago

Good write

The star is rising and it has your face on it. I will comment on your works as I read them. Well done and best wishes. T.

arja

16 years 2 months ago

…i wonder where the

...i wonder where the feelings here are? i like reading it though.. :)

Mark

16 years 2 months ago

And then..

And then love once again :) Don't believe what is said about only having love once (it's just different the next time) A bit of a gripe a bit of a sweet write, Sinthya.. Mark Resilient Flexibility RUN; when there seems to be no answer common sense will not speak, so run - -go running..

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