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destiny
Apr 09, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Self-fulfilling Prophecy

Space void of meaning.
Time  consumed by fear.
Life devoured by nothing.
Hope buried with the dead.
Self-fulfilling prophecy you have become.
Your fears become your reality.
The things that have yet to come
have complete disregard of things to come.
Thoughts foreshadow your future.
As you step into a forced eternity.
You have become the self-fulfilling prophecy.
— destiny, Apr 09, 2010

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Region, Country: Maryland, USA

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Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 3 months ago

I love it

I don't know what to say i just love it. Love, Alice Carrying your own battle scars is a sign of your own strength. Carrying others battle scars is a sign of your very soul.
LC

Lenny of Cohen

16 years 3 months ago

Bravo!

a powerful write my friend. Love, Light and Laughter to All Beings Namaste, Lenny
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

I liked it, and it can be

I liked it, and it can be interputed as true. Good write Destiny. I do recommend losing your ".'s" at the end of most of your lines when using the bold, we get the sentance structure, so it ends up destracting from the words and meaning. In my opinion. You could have used a line break or two as well, again in my opinion. But I thought it came out very nicely. Julie D.D.

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