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Come closer to me
You come closer to my lips
then you place your lips upon my ears
why do you love to tease
do come and kiss me
let us come closer to each one
remove our clothes for fun
then I will rest upon you
and then do whatever you want to do
okay, okay, okay
the drums beat to our tunes
sweetly we are absorbed in between
come closer to me
love me
love me
love now
you can't stay away from me
come closer darling
come closer to me
now, now, now
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
mand
Fri, 2013-12-20 04:16
Hi Loved!
Phew! Hot stuff! Vibrant with passion and longing.
Now where's Russell! Lol
Love Mand xxxxxxx
Ian.T
Fri, 2013-12-20 04:25
Hey!
Off to the cold shower with you lol???
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Fri, 2013-12-20 14:42
it's snowing
have a hot bath
stay indoors
then Rfol
loved
loved
Fri, 2013-12-20 08:54
who ever russel may be
he must still be rustling
lol hahahaha
thanks Mand
loved