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Forsythia

Irony
insists on
these two things:

your tongue taming
the yellow.

I forget
what
the other is.

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Maybe it is the smothering beauty of the green, that arrives late,
is the rest of the write ??
As short as this is, it is a large puzzle to sort out, it has a multitude of sighs..
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I'd be grateful if you could remember the other one :) though I loved the
ending lines very much.
Does your yellow flower symbolize the coward?

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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and when I remember, I might not tell you.

Love it.

cheers,
Jess
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Like how your poetry bleeds off
like that..like someone thinking aloud
away....looking into that distance..
I remember conversations
with people like this..
I talk aloud like this all the time
and it just pisses people off.

I like smart people
creative people..
realize how rare
it is
to find them...

MIssed this poem
but not really..

I found this..!

You Know there are two things in poetry which are of utmost importance : a good memory and......and.......uh....what were we talking about?.............stan

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