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still searching..
In search of you
a friend who once spoke
high of a golden world of poetry
and at the helm was I
where in the wilderness
have you amalgamated into thin air,
vanished!
why have you my friend from a poet's life banished,
where amongst the myriads of stars
shall I now find another friend?
my well wisher of your kind
return to me the smiles I gave
so that poetry flowed from my pathway
to lead a soul to greater glory,
come now, make life no more gory,
'tis a life time's venture I compose
and to the cauldrons of time
my mind’s creations I dispose..
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Frenchf
Tue, 2013-02-12 23:52
Who is not your friend
Any longer on neopoets ?
loved
Tue, 2013-02-12 23:59
you are good
you do humour------
ask some who addressme as
assssssssssss....
with a caps
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Seren
Wed, 2013-02-13 07:15
Another commentary poem I can
Another commentary poem I can't see anything to fault
I'm sure your friend will return we all come and go as
Life permits
Heres hoping you see your friend sooner rather than later
Love Jc :)
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
loved
Wed, 2013-02-13 07:18
SO THOUGHTFUL and kind
glad you are back in form
loved
Ian.T
Fri, 2013-02-22 04:00
Loved
We all have many things to do and your friends are still here, they read each day and sometimes your man made time runs out on them.
As you can see by my 00-00 Blog I am up late each night, that I don't comment doesn't mean that I haven't read your poetry, it is just having more hours would be a good thing lol.
Take care young Bard and keep writing, Yours as always Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Fri, 2013-02-22 04:45
you lighten
my heart
how glad I am to know
you do....
loved