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ABOUT RAINBOWS
ABOUT RAINBOWS
[In memory]
I’m sorry for the words
I never did say
and all the things
I didn’t do for you.
I’m sorry for the silent days
and my stubborn ways.
But most of all I’m sorry
you never did see
the rainbow in me.
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Comments
scribbler
Thu, 2012-07-19 20:05
hi Joe
Beautiful as always............stan
scribbler
Thu, 2012-07-19 20:06
hi Joe
Beautiful as always............stan
Geremia
Thu, 2012-07-19 21:22
Thanks, Stan.
Thanks, Stan.
Thanks, Stan
Joe
Joe
:)
Ian.T
Fri, 2012-07-20 11:40
Joe
We did see a rainbow in you lol.
A lovely piece again young Joe, its a joy to have some people to walk with that teach many things and you are there Joe as we journey on, Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Geremia
Fri, 2012-07-20 06:26
Thank you, Ian. We are each a
Thank you, Ian. We are each a variant of the same Archetype
weirdelf
Fri, 2012-07-20 11:12
This touched me deeply
When you nail it, Joe, you really nail it.
I can't help but think that anyone who failed to see the rainbow in you... well, it was probably their failing as much as yours.
cheers,
Jess
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Geremia
Fri, 2012-07-20 11:21
Thank you for that. joe
Thank you for that.
joe