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ABOUT RAINBOWS

Submitted by Geremia on Thu, 2012-07-19 19:10

ABOUT RAINBOWS
[In memory]

I’m sorry for the words
I never did say
and all the things
I didn’t do for you.
I’m sorry for the silent days
and my stubborn ways.
But most of all I’m sorry
you never did see
the rainbow in me.

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scribbler

Thu, 2012-07-19 20:05

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Beautiful as always............stan

scribbler

Thu, 2012-07-19 20:06

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Beautiful as always............stan

Geremia

Thu, 2012-07-19 21:22

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Thanks, Stan.
Thanks, Stan

Joe
Joe

:)

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Ian.T

Fri, 2012-07-20 11:40

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We did see a rainbow in you lol.
A lovely piece again young Joe, its a joy to have some people to walk with that teach many things and you are there Joe as we journey on, Yours Ian.T

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So find more reasons to believe in others..

Geremia

Fri, 2012-07-20 06:26

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Thank you, Ian. We are each a variant of the same Archetype

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weirdelf

Fri, 2012-07-20 11:12

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When you nail it, Joe, you really nail it.

I can't help but think that anyone who failed to see the rainbow in you... well, it was probably their failing as much as yours.

cheers,
Jess
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Geremia

Fri, 2012-07-20 11:21

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Thank you for that.

joe

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