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Geetime... May contest

Submitted by Geezer on Sun, 2019-05-05 18:07

Wrestling with words
as I watch "The Man"
Pay attention as best I can

Wrestle on, stay in kayfabe
Don't let them know
Keep on truckin', go Gee, go

MJ, Neo. and Geezer's Killer
Love Wendy, my long wife
These are the things, make my life

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
Editing stage: 
Editing - draft
Contest: 
POETIC SELFIE (May Contest)

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Rula

Mon, 2019-05-06 16:38

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The title reminds me of Tea Time :)

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Geezer

Tue, 2019-05-07 17:44

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I did sorta think about the similarity. ~ Geezer.
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Simon

Thu, 2019-05-09 07:55

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In poetry emotion is the weels that moves thought, and Passion executes it.
It's a nice one.

Until you live and allow life to past through you you will never understand life

I rather learn how to fish than beg for one.

It's been a while.

Geezer

Tue, 2019-05-07 17:47

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Glad to see you writing again. I thought we had lost you. Stick around and keep posting. ~ Geezer.
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Simon

Thu, 2019-05-09 08:00

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just a little busy pursuing something here well, thank God am back

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