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Surveillance Status:
Some persons and a few nations
Borderline insecurity
Proscriptions and persecutions
Removal of immunity
Illegal invasions war crimes
Tipping point duly approaching
Criminal court proceeding times
Due just punishment processing
Current balance unworkable
Time for graceful abdication
Need for leadership reshuffle
Regional borders revision
Absence of the source aggression
Resulting in stability
Logical common progression
Peaceful regional unity
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Geezer
Fri, 2018-06-01 09:11
As per usual...
you have stated political views widely held and done it with style. ~ Geezer.
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OriginalRhyku
Fri, 2018-06-01 10:51
Geezer,
Thank you for your kind words and I am gratified to be one among many in the widely held opinions.
Although what perplexes me is that if the views are widely held, then the oligarchy is holding the reins on the status quo without the public majority consent or even the status of a quorum.
author commentOriginalRhyku
Fri, 2018-06-01 10:51
Geezer,
Thank you for your kind words and I am gratified to be one among many in the widely held opinions.
Although what perplexes me is that if the views are widely held, then the oligarchy is holding the reins on the status quo without the public majority consent or even the status of a quorum.
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