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Leaf
sweet breeze
or howling gale
I fly by it
I am
a dry leaf
not held by weight
I will
love until
I crumble
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Comments
lovedly
Fri, 2018-02-23 12:03
think of modifying it... if you will
not hold by weight
not held!!! by... may be okay/better if u will
have you read my Feb poetry
kindly do and advise
I'm freer now till tomorrow
IRiz
Sat, 2018-02-24 09:31
I did . Thank you.
I did .
Thank you.
IRiz
raj
Fri, 2018-02-23 13:03
making most of life we are
making most of life we are blessed with by overcoming adversities is what I read between the lines...at least that is how i perceived it...
loved the presentation of message....
raj (sublime_ocean)
IRiz
Sat, 2018-02-24 09:31
Thank you.
Thank you.
IRiz