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Death
My heart breaks through the outer walls of my body and shatters, in my hands.
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Experimenting with writing one-line poems
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Eumolpus
Wed, 2017-08-16 00:30
hi poetess
what a wonderful minimalism. I think it's great that you are getting so much meaning and physical energy in so few words.
Soon you will be putting these types of lines together and making very intense and passionate works. This I'm looking forward to indeed!
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ee cummings