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FELLINI DREAMS
FELLINI DREAMS
I slumber
into a sleep
deep foreboding, and am pulled
into places
familiar and strange
– a Fellini world
of dark and darker.
my mind reels
in the surreal
as dream begins
to break
into a fractured reflection
of the self.…
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Comments
chevyvent
Tue, 2016-10-25 16:33
Very good work piece
I was moved by the ambiance of the piece.
Mario Vitale
Jasmine.
Tue, 2016-10-25 17:04
Dreams
Whispers in my ear, dreams of fear
Where can I turn, where can I hide
From all these evil eyes.
When my dreams are sweet, I can sleep forever, but when sweet turns to nightmare, I am up all night. Love everything about this amazing poem!
Esker
Wed, 2016-10-26 10:50
visionary..empassioned filmaker....
so italian...Italian friends showed met his
movie..Amacore..think thats right..
then I found other of his works..
Surreal fantasies....good times in darkness
and the beautiful women...
Dreaming the other nite
about a muse...
an apartment....
a softness and intimacy
which was rare
but now remember
was...
exhaustion..pain killers
coping mechanism
the world twisting
like a snake battling
another snake
the Helix of flux
and flumacy continues
Excellent Poem
thank U for the Writes
my friend
Mr Wolf!
Candlewitch
Wed, 2016-10-26 13:34
excellent...
expression of a very bad night! may your nightmares be few!
*hugs, Cat
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Geremia
Thu, 2016-10-27 10:46
:)
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