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FIRE
FIRE
I am shattered and broken
beyond endurance
yet I feel the fire of life
still burning.
I am electricity; electric blue,
the elemental life force
and the essence of Self
that binds me to Creation.
I am the way of all humanity:
the Soul in a covenant of one,
one among all, all into one.
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Comments
alidzain
Thu, 2016-04-28 14:18
Joe
Now that's a real dose of positive energy in the poem, bro. Good one.
Alid
Geremia
Tue, 2016-05-24 16:39
thank you, Alid
thank you, Alid
Esker
Thu, 2016-04-28 15:09
I like this....
Reminds me of my interests in Tesla and Fermi...
St Elmos Fire of the aviator and the shipcrew...
touring about today....I think of Chuck Berry..
riding along in my automobile...
no particular place to go...
and yet..
I am the go
the place..
and reading here in the busy library
the air exchanger humming..
work was good...the boss
and I always connecting
that creative fire
I am just a day cleaner but a
part of the family there..
some few hours...
Thank U for this elaborate
and lively poem Geremia!
Mr Esker!
Geremia
Tue, 2016-05-24 16:40
Thanks to you, Steven. am at
Thanks to you, Steven. am at me end.
Esker
Tue, 2016-05-24 16:54
Thank U Joe! the writing is crisp!
concise...
Great Poetry sir!
Mr Esker!
Geremia
Tue, 2016-05-24 16:56
:)
:)
lovedly
Wed, 2016-05-25 01:52
my mind is now being eroded
my mind is now being eroded
as they pull at my teeth
like a guy pulls a gal's hair
she yells
but smiles
pain O hell
your pull does tell
your love is strewn
so does my dentist lady smile at me
phew such bad teeth have you
still I shall straighten some too
Old man on the path to his final home
the cave
I won't say
grave....
she smiles..
and
pricks into the roots deep
I yell and nearly weep!
Joe your poetry still inspires me
mand
Wed, 2016-05-25 04:07
Hi Joe
Powerful fight back. Inspiring!
Great write - :)
LOve Mand xxxx