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FIRE

Submitted by Geremia on Thu, 2016-04-28 11:38

FIRE

I am shattered and broken
beyond endurance
yet I feel the fire of life
still burning.
I am electricity; electric blue,
the elemental life force
and the essence of Self
that binds me to Creation.
I am the way of all humanity:
the Soul in a covenant of one,
one among all, all into one.

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Comments

alidzain

Thu, 2016-04-28 14:18

Joe

Now that's a real dose of positive energy in the poem, bro. Good one.

Alid

Geremia

Tue, 2016-05-24 16:39

thank you, Alid

author comment

Esker

Thu, 2016-04-28 15:09

I like this....

Reminds me of my interests in Tesla and Fermi...
St Elmos Fire of the aviator and the shipcrew...
touring about today....I think of Chuck Berry..
riding along in my automobile...
no particular place to go...
and yet..

I am the go
the place..

and reading here in the busy library
the air exchanger humming..
work was good...the boss
and I always connecting
that creative fire

I am just a day cleaner but a
part of the family there..
some few hours...

Thank U for this elaborate
and lively poem Geremia!

Mr Esker!

Geremia

Tue, 2016-05-24 16:40