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"Study In Pink WS" Urilla leaves London.
Epilogue Number Four
This has been a trying time
many heads without bodies in the city
and horrid rumors of Mog intertwine
Macwell's hotel up in flames
murdered by Creel lacking pity.
Creel's murder trial is underway
in court I’ve testified under oath
evidence and facts on display
in an affidavit I wrote.
Off on an adventurous trip to America
to write a memoir this horror—murder case
had enough of this town and its headless murders
Sure glad mog scare was just a hoax to save face
In the stockyard of London
now back to normal.
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Rula
Sun, 2014-10-26 16:12
you shocked me Barbara
Has Urilla really followed Mog to USA. She must be insane if she really did.
Great fun here indeed.
Thanks for sharing dear detective!
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Barbara Writes
Mon, 2014-10-27 00:57
Rula
Thanks, don't know why she'd do something that insane. Lol
Much fun
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Ian.T
Sun, 2014-10-26 20:13
Barbara
I wonder if the young lady caught the same ship as Mog LOL.
America is going to have such fun with Nevermore, Killer, Digit and now Mog being sought out by his friend, has Mog split into two just in case there is an accident LOL.
See you all in the Renga room, has the subject been sorted yet ??
Have a lovely evening out there Yours Ian x
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So find more reasons to believe in others..
Barbara Writes
Mon, 2014-10-27 00:58
Iian
Rather fun storytelling. Yes it's been sorted. I sent it to Wesley for approval. As I changed it some to shorten
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Ian.T
Mon, 2014-10-27 04:25
Barbara
Great to have your Epilogue we can end this story for a while,
Halloween is just around the corner so anything goes even heads may roll,
Yours Ian
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Barbara Writes
Mon, 2014-10-27 08:03
Ian
Thanks it was a joy learning to wtite one
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alidzain
Mon, 2014-10-27 19:44
Hi Barbara
that last line in the 2nd last stanza "Sure glad mog scare was just a hoax to save face" makes ,me wonder if Urilla did not believe that Mog exist.
Alid
Barbara Writes
Mon, 2014-10-27 21:33
Alid
She like the rest thought it was just rumors. Somewhat unaware she herself was taken over, but bc mog saw the tight between macwill and creel left her rushed their to cause the double carnage death of macwill and hanging of creel. His work in London is done and is on to new things
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alidzain
Mon, 2014-10-27 23:21
Thank you
for the clarification.
Alid
Barbara Writes
Mon, 2014-10-27 23:50
welcome
Thanks for asking for clarification. You were right on with your suspicions.
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