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Worries from past
sabotaging present
old memories
haunting tapestries
woven into now
wish they'd take a bow
and exit stage door
don't want them anymore

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Structured: Western
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Interesting that when temporarily depressed the quality of your work fell

thanks a mil x

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I like this one Sue I can't find anything to crit

Well done

Jc ~

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

thanks a mil so glad u enjoyed this little one all the best cheers sueb x

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