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v o c a b u l a r y

Submitted by Esker on Sun, 2012-07-08 00:53

fat green days of heat
the rain still misting

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

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Roscoe Lane

Tue, 2012-07-10 13:51

Esker,

Esker, your poem is very apt, as we seem to be having tropical weather here in London. As i read this i kept wanting to put it this way. fat green days of heat, stills the misting rain. Regards Roscoe..

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

Esker

Tue, 2012-07-10 14:01

lucky to have the great weather

some years it was rain all the time
the tomatoes didnt even ripen the
entire summer Imagine!!

just a short poem
to show I dont have to always write
the long works I like too

Thank You
we are having a good summer are we not!!

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Ian.T

Thu, 2012-07-12 04:07

Steve

That Roscoe must be hiding in the tropical part of the Eden project,
We are 100 miles north of him and here is a Haiku to tell you what it is like LOL:-

Summer never came
Starving swallows flying low
By roadkill carcase

I am going to that tropical London they say that cities develop their own atmosphere.
Woops! your write was excellent as usual, Yours Ian.T

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So find more reasons to believe in others..

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