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V E S H C H E S

Submitted by Esker on Sat, 2012-04-14 02:23

cerrulean steptic
dissolve this
the slender notion
daizemul dream

choke the ballad
of hemerocallis
laced in the splinter
eye
traced in the broken
womb
cradlegrave smokey
ebb

they wore their work well
while the song of the spade
sang through the rain greased
shale

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Ian.T

Sun, 2012-04-29 10:11

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so sorry but between the Clockwork Orange and Day Lillie's you lost me a bit too many words that need a book.
Sounds of working on the Railway sprang to mind but many are left at the track side on this one,
Yours Ian.T

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