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TRUE REFLECTIONS--edit

TRUE REFLECTIONS

as i wander farther from myself
into dissolution
bleeding edges of annihilation
I hold to what is left
of me
in memory and recollection
where I see
my lasting and true
reflection

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And I so relate.

A small point. reflexion is lazy American spelling. The word is reflection.

cheers,
Jess
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