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THE TIN MAN
THE TIN MAN
If I had a heart
it would bleed
for losing you.
If I had a soul
it would die
for missing you.
And if this heart and soul
could speak
they would tell you
that I did love you.
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Nordic cloud
Mon, 2012-04-23 07:51
I immediately thought of The
I immediately thought of The Wizard of Oz, but I see it isn't he.
This is beautifully put Joe, and so subtle tooooo.
Anni
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
Geremia
Mon, 2012-04-23 09:39
Takk :)
Takk :)
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