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a thought in flight

a thought in flight pauses
on its panting path
to touch a pensive mind
the rushing notion
defies the mocking ripples
of many words' estuary
cascades vehemently along
till it ponds in solitude

lost in the obscurity
of a verbal world
the thought slowly turns
into a crafty alphabet

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and thoughtful piece.
You are a master word-crafter, sir.
My only crit perhaps shows in the stumble in my reading.
the thought turns slowly

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for dropping by Jess... appreciate.

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