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THE TENDER HEART
the tender heart
please, don't see me
the way I am today
my heart hasn't changed
my soul is the same
and the little boy of five
is still alive inside
somewhere
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Comments
alidzain
Sun, 2014-09-21 13:17
Hi there!
Good one.
Alid
Ian.T
Sun, 2014-09-21 19:08
Joe
For ever young, lovely to see you grasp that our thoughts don't age , it is only our actions that change our outlook.
We shall all return as children, and find our own level in the way of things,
Yours, Ian
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
raj
Sun, 2014-09-21 21:22
Joe
The child within us stays alive, especially when one reminisces about those years, some of joy some of nightmares. I still get nightmares once in a while about not completing my Journal which is to be submitted to the teacher next day..lol..
A nice crisp poem. I enjoyed it.
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)