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Harrow time
your spline splits
fertile dreams
ahead of rains you race
the dark of clouds
upon the beauty
of your tragic face

our room of ruin
where we threw
chagrins against
the wall and slammed
our hearts down
worn hall

this fain fall
gentle and perplexed
these tears for want
they taste the velvet
of your skin

and a halo of damp
upon the dark length
of hair
shines in this spotlight
lair

our spirits restless stare
and a hurrying wind
licks drips from the arms
of eternity

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your voice against my ear.....
forever ever to the year of 2008

"Until again"

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your second stanza is exceptional

you write of the states of human condition
better than anyone i've read

you tap into a depth that many would shie away from, and
you present pain, regret, disappointment, love, etc...in the same way....
each the mirror of conflicting feelings, and so, so relatable (sp?)

reading your writes never fails to make me feel...

i don't give a shit about the odd spelling or grammatical "mistake"...
mostly, they are not mistakes...i get that now

love your pen
love you

your
m (always)

"Faint fall" a spelling error but I like "Fain" which was supposed
to be "rain"

My "M"
I've lived this life
pockets of love
meeting
arrangement

stuff of books
songs
poetry

a wretched immense grand view
like living in a ruin of beauty
the wealth of squalor against
ones shoulder

I feel oh I do
I get tastes and hunger tid bits from
muses I cannot own
for who wishes for that beauty with
wings to be in a cage

the night is alive with the magic of
our short spring summer
the rains have allowed the frogs
to mate small peepers a most
melancholic banter
rain taste in the air
bringing forth a haunted ache
that is unavoidable

Im not a settled soul at all
and I should never tempt nor
taste that forbidden desire
or draw it close to feel its fire

I have nothing but to delve into the
depth
and im terrified of water
and those depths
and angry too

maybe love makes one brave
foolhardy so

best to make an attempt
though I figure

If there were a sea I could swim
to lie upon a shore sun stoked
or fire tended
I would be the keep to your night
wher the twisting embers stitch
stars of fate upon the constellation
of my passion

love you

evermore

your Wolf

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Can't say i get all of what you write, but i feel a beautiful complex pasion in everything you write. I enjoyed reading this just for what i can take from it. Regards Roscoe..

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

the rush to plant
rebirth
care
tenderness through the breaking of ground

like any relationship
it has its moments
and worries and risks
for bearing anything at all but heartbreak and loss
sometimes

Love is a scarecrow
or the black bird come to feast
on the remains of famine

Love is the hard sought
crop beaten by hail and storms
that one wears upon a sleeve
with smiles worn

rail against passion
in the shelter
our rooms of many thoughts
the halls familar and worn

Nightime moments
beneath the yard light
the streetlight
with the muse of darkness
the kiss of the unknown
and daring

that power that surges
in the starless eve
with rains falling

and ghosts rising

Thank You

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Bow WOW WOW WOW!

Love it all WOWLF.
Ever the coiner of unusual titles, this takes the...not sure what...
prize in specialness/oddness?

Love this :-
"your spline splits
fertile dreams"

No I too wouldn't wish you to change anything, who cares if there
are places odd, that's what there are in life anyway!

Ann.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

I've been quiet just reading your works lately
and enjoying pics elsewhere

my collection on things on the street I have in my
mind as it changes all the time
I have to pick up a case for camera that is attached
to my belt The last one was in my pocket and picked
up gravel and become Broken forever
despite my work on it

I save it in parts as it is very interesting this way

"Spline" is not "Spine" "Spine" for me would be a fexible
word Spline is different from spindle too
both have different jobs as do words in language

Im very happy that you like the poetry as it is presented
thinking in a different manner sometimes allows for
poetry to emerge from a corner or vantage where
poetry does not usually come from in creativity

I think anyway

"Prize in specialness/ Oddness" this is spot on identification
of this meaning

Ataya the blonde artistic soul took a pic of an unusual insect
on the door when returning the other day from school or college
course and snapped a pic and researched it
It was T shaped and is a Plume Moth

not from around here at all I surmised that It was blown off
course by the great winds of upheaval these days
and isnt creativity like this
why retreat to the basement if one can be swept up and find
oneself in a poetic landscape far far away from the usual

Thank You Ann

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I wasn't criticising the word spline, I was LOVING it,
even if it is a new word for me, I shall adopt it as a
word anyway, when I was 4 or so I said that the waves
were swipping up the beach, that is NOW underlined as
a wrong spelling.

In Norwegian svippe is to whip up, and so maybe my genes
remembered something from another time when the N.
owned the west of Scotland, where my maternal ancestors come from.

Yes the sudden arrival of a bird that hasn't been seen in
the area before, we become inspired, and s it is with so
much of human things found in nature, rubbish or whatever,
their juxtaposition makes for excitement and creativity, in me anyway.

Today we saw some bent trees, deformed perhaps by snow
and frost, they looked like elephant trunks, and there were three
in a row, the first and biggest one was the most odd one we had
ever seen, and there are a number of them in the forests.
See my blog on Cauldron Lake, that was where we saw them.
The other thing that surprised me on the walk wer the blue
grasses, I shall send them to you..

Prego Steven.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

our soil was thin from the glacier
Free though in the eighteen fifties onward
if you cleared an acre of stumps and planted
put up a home etc My dads people were
from Holland via New York in the mid
sixteen hundreds His father and he
worked the railroad Our village though
for a time was farmed barns crops before
it just gave out much hills and stone piles
and old machines laying about in rusting
heaps One of them was a hay rake
right near us on the hill I m sure that raking
hay by hand is quite a chore so that the rake
would gather it up by horsepower

Im not describing physical planting
the idea but put in Spline as it was used much
for this and im not good at math so its not
a math word

I find creativity in all things too Ann

Thank You

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