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STICK: updated
THE STICK
I saw a stick strong and bold
fall to this world
from a midnight sky.
it pierced the earth
with a sigh
and cast shadows twisted and worn
in the light of a pale moon.
I touched it to see
If this were the miracle
to set me free.
Suddenly
t became a livng thing
wrapped itself around
me like a string.
Now I cast shadows
twisted and worn
in the light of sun
and dark of moon
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Comments
China Blue
Mon, 2012-06-11 12:02
Joe
The image this poem produces is astounding.
Chrys
Let your mercy spill on all these burning hearts in hell(Leonard Cohen)
Geremia
Mon, 2012-06-11 13:46
Thank you. Chrys, I work
Thank you. Chrys, I work better in allegory than being too diirect and descriptive.