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Seems You Found love

Oh, at long last I’ve found you,
Only the news is far from good,
Seems you found love,
You seem happy, and so fulfilled,
But did I think that
You’d be lonely for all those years?

Oh, what was I looking for?
You tried so hard, but I never thawed,
Seems you found love,
You seem happy, and so fulfilled,
I never knew what I found,
And what I lost, and how much I’d miss you.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Jeeze I feel for you, it was never meant to be, imagine if somewhere in this mad world there is a women writing the exact same poetry about you! Now that's a cool thought.
As always you really make the reader believe every word and every emotion.
Take care my friend.

Thank you...Teddy

Teddy, thank you for your encouraging and insightful words, I'm so pleased my writings have that effect, which was of course the intention. Carl.

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