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My Past in Peace

One day, I’d like to go
In search of my past,
Of the memories
Of a misspent youth;
I cry for my souvenirs,
I dream of a beautiful future,
Where I can atone
For all my follies,
And contemplate my past
In peace at long last.

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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'My Past in Peace' constitutes the French to English translation of a song’s mournful middle 8, the song itself having been recorded in 2012 or '13 as part of a series of songs, several being either in French, or having French sections of varying length.
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

its me again! Hey I do hope you find what you are looking for, i think this is gorgeous, having followed your work i get it all. so i'm quite impressed to hear you will be searching for your solace. I think we all diserve it don't we? ending a long lasting chapter that feels like a moment to begin a far more favourable one that may be joyful for a lifetime. you are ever inspiring to me.

Thank you...Teddy

We all deserve some solace, it remains to be seen whether I shall find it though, indeed whether any of us do, I am so pleased you like this so much, Teddy, I have said it before, I love your comments, so encouraging, it's good to know I am inspiring you, that means more than words can say. Carl.

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