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eager to be slim
because he wants her to be thin
shes a rake
that dont need the cake
(let them falsehood bitchs eat dat)
and he dangles girls by her
streamline designer
draws her in
adjusting to win
and the boys are falling
hard as chrome
soft as rain
because they love the way
she shows the pain
they want to be her
brand new stain
but deep down
theres an angel
dark from heaven
fields
the slain
the wings are
dripping white
as down
to steal sweet
innocence the crown
and all the while torn
all around
like wolves
to red
the running white
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Comments
Roscoe Lane
Mon, 2012-10-15 19:48
A the pain,
A the pain of want, described perfectly. Regards Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
Esker
Mon, 2012-10-15 20:27
To: Alice White!
Thank You..Mr Wolf
judyanne
Tue, 2012-10-16 12:24
liked the write
without being aware that it was about alice white
love it knowing this
you've done it yet again esker
love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
Esker
Tue, 2012-10-16 12:55
alice white....
not of Lewis Caroll the mathmetician turned writer
whose works were illustrated by an illustrator who
drew for the LONDON TIMES
lewis Caroll in my study was an oddity
his collection of personal interests are not mine
The Alice white of mine
searched the troposhere
Backscatter gaze
people whom are faded
with history pain time
they are ghosts in their Now
the are poetry without words
Lewis wrote for someone
where in my
life
the Alice's Ive worked for
are real
they are beautiful
Thank You!