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eager to be slim
because he wants her to be thin

shes a rake
that dont need the cake
(let them falsehood bitchs eat dat)

and he dangles girls by her
streamline designer
draws her in
adjusting to win

and the boys are falling
hard as chrome
soft as rain
because they love the way
she shows the pain

they want to be her
brand new stain

but deep down
theres an angel
dark from heaven
the slain

the wings are
dripping white
as down

to steal sweet
innocence the crown

and all the while torn
all around
like wolves
to red
the running white

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A the pain of want, described perfectly. Regards Roscoe..

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

Thank You..Mr Wolf

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without being aware that it was about alice white

love it knowing this

you've done it yet again esker
love judy

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

not of Lewis Caroll the mathmetician turned writer
whose works were illustrated by an illustrator who
drew for the LONDON TIMES

lewis Caroll in my study was an oddity
his collection of personal interests are not mine

The Alice white of mine
searched the troposhere
Backscatter gaze

people whom are faded
with history pain time
they are ghosts in their Now
the are poetry without words

Lewis wrote for someone
where in my
the Alice's Ive worked for
are real

they are beautiful

Thank You!

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