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burn like a flame
You want serious cred
but your hearts full
of blame

Im a cat on the edge
V-for Verve in my name
you come back with
your claws
cause you style a

morning glory
head hunter
fishing stories
wanna bore me

(but I wait all day
for your voice
un resined baby
Im your bow on
a fresh mint string
so draw
and make this
hurt sing!!!!!)

Editing stage: 


that certain someone's voice.

I work all day with anticipation
It doesn't matter what you say
Zoning out, no content
I've been waiting all the day

I think this is the beginning of a poem! Thanks Esker. ~ Gee

Writing purely for oneself, is the ultimate in defensive posture.

Debbie Harry did a guest voice clip in the Gran Theft Game
the early one for a cab company Game based out of Florida
in eighties and then in the movie "Bringing out the Dead"
the one driver is in love with a dispatch character..I read
that book the movie is based on. I used to hang out with an ambulance driver
from Toronto in the heydays of the seventies...Used to drag
me out for coffee and chatter...debriefing....

Voices are many...
I like your poem beginning...

Thanks Geezer

author comment

the idea that sparked it. Haven't finished it yet, but soon. Kinda tired after working 12 hr. shift.
That ambulance driver had some tales, I bet! ~ Gee

Writing purely for oneself, is the ultimate in defensive posture.

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