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S a l i v a t e ..

Submitted by Esker on Mon, 2012-09-17 22:31

joyride me

oh come then pick my pockets
the jewel loot

pick those precious teeth
with fine bones

let your skill of vivisection
cut away
what you wish of me

an eye full of stars
bright as tears
the cold cup of light
bathing wounds

and in our souls
the sound
like rain upon the roof

the tender cold kiss
for a whole given
love as proof

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Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Tue, 2012-09-18 10:28

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A beautiful write, that jumps from one item to the next yet flows with feelings that make mouths water..as the title..
Mind you a cold kiss needs a little gas fire under it lol
Yours Ian.T

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So find more reasons to believe in others..

Esker

Tue, 2012-09-18 12:13

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all all that a viking owned went with him to the afterlife

back when times were simpler
on a boat..

now its all equality which is good
the Brave New World......

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docmaverick

Wed, 2012-09-19 07:04

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...boy howdy ! This is not a poem that calls one into the wading end of the pond. This was "deep"!
Bully,
Sincerely,
doc.

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Esker

Wed, 2012-09-19 22:49

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jewelled with her crown from heaven..

Deep depths..dream time beginnings
not the frill thrill
je ne cest pas

it is
it isnt

Poetry
a mirror
of admiration
admire of

that this has evoked some thoughts

excellent....

Thank You!

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Esker

Wed, 2012-09-19 22:54

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I am grateful for your comments Lonnie
I remember reading others works too
before and now

not understanding the context
but the joy in its beauty of its
flow.. its beginning and end

yes

and Thank You

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