Nevermore. Nicely assembled with allusions to that which *may be out of our reach, in that it's personal. Poe, as you know, was a perfectionist in form. A contemporary of Dickens? I think so. Translated by Baudelaire, certainly a worthy topic. I sense the meaning, but its not entirely clear, which of course - doesn't mean that it is any less worthy. I like your use of words here, and I love the Raven as a symbol. I think it would be worth a well loud reading in a park, so you can hear it, and then maybe more sense will come.

Cheers.
"cawww cawww"