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Through The Ages

find where the place of the father's gin
hope for their shelter grin
save it slime ball
lift up the hammer to be exposed
love has been fashionable
we drift back at a finder's keeper
in direct communication...

let it go of all sorted freeze
down through the ages
step into the groove
drag through their net
sorry that we have missed

through a marshal appearance
a good call for fresh laughter
live each day as if it was the last
cheer up my good friend
a reason to be concerned

the black dog was in heat
tripping over his masters leash
barren trip gain...
The wicked will soon to be perished
it some goods to be different

child of nature classic divine
More of what ?
See me scream
beyond the tree's
lay hold of all shame
to stay in the game

As that a fruit will between more of what ?
What are you being driven to see...
love was on the way
to love & behold
savor reach moment
Unto the most bitter end...

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You are doing some of the things I have done
such as the Muses and a verse for each Muse.
Though you have listed all these statements in single line
I would love to see a verse for
as many of these lines as possible..
Yours Ian ..

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