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A R G O N V I S I O N

fuck with clarity
the wound
bittered with ache
when all the junk that is life
reminds you that your still
a cunt in wolves skins
stitched

piss on the kills and routes
kept that are sacred
sleeping in beating heart
hitch
to wake with life the bitch
you serve

let the tracking collar dig
in and wear thick
its just another prick
fucking eternity with
thoughts like raindrops
lost in rain

smile when the
clarity rises with passion
still moving
not mounted collecting
dust
the repose
of all life
with its snarls
and peace

ragged heart days
left alone
licking wounds
healed
beneath the heat

dreaming of sucking
mothers teat
before fierce
fires
copulating seasons
found fates
our dirty stub
of left overs
for grub

licking chops
with glazed eyes
beneath argon
skies
and existance's
visions

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upon your advice I have hashed out a somewhat
cross bred poem..I will think I shall post that
other one you love that I let you view privy between
us.. This is a voice I've not touched since arriving
here in 2007. Maybe six years of life and aging
is letting this old Wolf find his "snarl"
I bow for you my sweet on inspiration
for this context of expression!

Thank You!

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This is a great Lupis dream, or a picture of the life they lead not on a lead but wild and carefree.
Thought the whole piece was very well written.
Just a wee smudge:- reminds you that (your) still
a cunt in wolves skins...
The word in brackets needs a plaster lol or just a you're.
Take care poet of excellence Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I think you are right Ian
I did an original more off the cuff
the slam beat stuff is very hard to do
really I can see how they must have
practised a lot but from what I
read of the americans they lived
their lives muchly!

but this is an ode style to their works.
and Thank You for your correction!!

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My poetry lately has been wussy. You charge ahead with passion and greatness. Just one typo.

reminds you that your still [typo you're]

cheers,
Jess
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women and the men
there were and still are sane ones
but the ones who just woke up
and threw down their typewriters
and started hammering stuff out

I have this need for order for civility
paint and old scrap tidied up
and then I have this Dont give a fuck
attitude..Like OH YAH..Well watch
this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and cranking out
anything with a flair and oddity
of being because I just do let
myself go...I grew up so pecked
and shunned it wasnt funny
anyone else could get away with
murder and I squashed myself
in what I thought society wanted
and even there it was fucking hell
So then I became the lounge
lizard man Larger then life
persona in my city with wild
hair and eyes on my ragged
snazzy bike... I act like I want too
and still am able to pick up the
trash on the street that the
well heeled walk past and the
dirty unwashed..I DO
and I equally can slink into the
library and crank out some flashy
peices also

I worried about offending people
so I didnt write cuss words
and then something happened
I remembered all that poetry
that I loved from those egghead
poets from long ago The wild
stories of how they lived
(My life is somewhat quiet)
but I did live with those who
lived large..they were normal
looking musuem director helper
females and institution workers
but they were ablaze with passion
and drive and didnt care
their lives were poetry!

and suddenly I realized you dont
need a liscence for writing
and the I DONT GIVE A FUCK
side said..Hey here is Neopoet
this is like the coffee shop
poetry readings of the days gone
by..Those days are still here
rightt here!!!

so I post my funny stuff and my
odd stuff my lame stuff and then
stuff like this

I still remember feeling that shock
of reading poetry like this
of hanging out with my female
freinds and hearing them swear
talking about life in their preppy
wear..It was exciting!!
They did if first before I did
I was afraid for all these years
but I never forgot them
someone has to head out on the
dance floor first!!

great thing about Neo
it just is!!

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