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Plume Torrent Cocktail Twizzler

Braid your life upon my body
like braille chains
with links weeping sound
like brittle freezing tears
I sense you in your black
marvelous bird
with winds of blonde weathered
down your back
our shutterisland life
banging in the wind
I escape domecile
to the pleistoceon
tar pit lava drone
extinguishing my
manifestations of cave
paint poetry in the
slosh of the magicians
pallor
she peels my paper
on our walls
one layer
at a time
I want too
..
order another
and forget
that Im

..
walking further
to the mists
where I would like too
..

become intoxicated
in the crash of the
tangle
merging breath
lust life
and
depth

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the way the stanzas are woven into each other it is very catching and provocating of unerstanding your labyrinth... and class

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