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.............................p a r e r e

stillborn winds

the current
takes them

an ocean of night
deep thick

I am just
a dreaming

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The only Translation I can find for this is "I Obey"
Then all these things you say should no matter not Obey....
Yours Ian.T
Is it the rules of motion, or just a natural thing????

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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