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OPIODFREZNEL
Schist
Labirynthe
August Embrace
stealth the sleuth
of breeze
hesitant sleeper
stir string
the Beast
in beautiful bowel
depths
Cocles dark
swarm ghost
treasons
Splendors seasons
wait smolten wraths
and tendril wraiths
vexed too notion
life presumptious
neath Octobers
cold eye
Stir alive
the oracle dream
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Comments
Vivovon
Tue, 2016-09-13 13:52
its own beauty
August to October. Every season has its own beauty.
xxxxx
Sommer Lyn
Tue, 2016-09-13 18:28
This is beautiful. Especially
This is beautiful. Especially the description '..stir string/the beast/in beautiful bowel/depths..'. I feel there is a scrambling sense of coherence here, but I can keep up. I don't know if every reader would, but it's still a stunning collection of words on an abstract level even if one couldn't see the clear picture/follow the narrative. I like this very much. Thanks.
Esker
Wed, 2016-09-14 14:25
intuition and talent
the murk and vast clarity of Right Temporal Lobe essence
gleaning is a process
I appreciate the honesty in your comment
and I greatly admire the passion and intellect of your poems
the regard and intellectual incidental variances in that beam
is great
sweeping and full of the minute details I tend to
Love
following these works I create is not easy
they are my babies
word works
flashlight illumination
or pop rounds in the night
on the tour between twilight
and dawn
for me its based on love
and the drug like reaction
to its power
from others
Combinations
I dated many women
in my time
all brilliant
and beautiful
It was a choice
want and passion
or they kicked down
my walls
past the DO NOT DISTURB
sign and entered
tonic toxic token
besotted bespoken
interestingly enough
I tend to be drawn
towards the aussies
although my main
interest of humanity
and its culture and
creative blend of
land spirit and looks
is still Norway
rude crude refined
submission
domination
expressionism
diplomacy
and ruling classes
met all of this
ego and persona
the greatest
affect of humanity
and the results
of arts culture
society
today is a good day
fed..rested for once
dressed in the Sisley
brand look
a tad over rated for
,my age of fifty three
but thats what I like
thank U for taking the
words and work to
fathom these..
one of the more
interesting poets
I have met lately
Thank U! Sommer Lyn!
~