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OPIODFREZNEL

Schist
Labirynthe
August Embrace
stealth the sleuth
of breeze
hesitant sleeper
stir string
the Beast
in beautiful bowel
depths

Cocles dark
swarm ghost
treasons
Splendors seasons

wait smolten wraths
and tendril wraiths
vexed too notion
life presumptious
neath Octobers
cold eye

Stir alive
the oracle dream

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August to October. Every season has its own beauty.

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This is beautiful. Especially the description '..stir string/the beast/in beautiful bowel/depths..'. I feel there is a scrambling sense of coherence here, but I can keep up. I don't know if every reader would, but it's still a stunning collection of words on an abstract level even if one couldn't see the clear picture/follow the narrative. I like this very much. Thanks.

the murk and vast clarity of Right Temporal Lobe essence
gleaning is a process
I appreciate the honesty in your comment
and I greatly admire the passion and intellect of your poems
the regard and intellectual incidental variances in that beam
is great
sweeping and full of the minute details I tend to
Love

following these works I create is not easy
they are my babies
word works
flashlight illumination
or pop rounds in the night
on the tour between twilight
and dawn

for me its based on love
and the drug like reaction
to its power
from others
Combinations
I dated many women
in my time
all brilliant
and beautiful
It was a choice
want and passion
or they kicked down
my walls
past the DO NOT DISTURB
sign and entered
tonic toxic token
besotted bespoken

interestingly enough
I tend to be drawn
towards the aussies
although my main
interest of humanity
and its culture and
creative blend of
land spirit and looks
is still Norway

rude crude refined
submission
domination
expressionism
diplomacy
and ruling classes

met all of this

ego and persona
the greatest
affect of humanity
and the results
of arts culture
society

today is a good day
fed..rested for once
dressed in the Sisley
brand look
a tad over rated for
,my age of fifty three
but thats what I like

thank U for taking the
words and work to
fathom these..

one of the more
interesting poets
I have met lately

Thank U! Sommer Lyn!
~

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