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nouveau
glitter in the glass
shine like tiger in its grass
you were mirage glare
freedom
a song I had lost
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Rula
Mon, 2013-04-29 12:36
Hello Steve
Can't get the full image of the first stanza but thought the second one
really deserves the title...Certainly nouveau
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loved
Tue, 2013-04-30 10:13
above my balding
mind
once again
though
short and sweet
loved
Geezer
Tue, 2013-04-30 19:35
I think...
I get the image you were trying to project in the first stanza. The elusive quality of both the glitter in the glass and the tiger in the grass? ~ Gee
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place
Esker
Wed, 2013-05-01 10:36
personal sentiment
I have issues concerning alcohol
denial and addiction for this poet
is not seeing what is there
the potential of greatness
for calamity
Or the power of that
i never felt away or free
so I threw what I did not percieve
as freedom aside