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Today I lost my friend, my husband
He went to sleep, and never returned

No time for goodbyes
Now only tears and sighs

Someone came and took him by the
hand, and carried him away before

the dawn of the day.Nothing left to say
except I will miss you my sweet love.

And hope to see you in my dreams.

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I hope this is not autobiographical. If it is I hope you'll be able to overcome the sad emotions and the void that you might feel for losing such a friend.
I played here a little with the line-break where I thought it might give a better read.

Today I lost my friend, my husband
He went to sleep, and never returned
No time for goodbyes
Now only tears and sighs

Someone came and took him by
the hand, and carried him away before
the dawn of the day.Nothing left to say
except I will miss you my sweet love,
And hope to see you in my dreams.

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Yes, my husband did pass away.I found him in the morning . He was already gone. nothing I could do tp help him I like the rearrangement of the words....... when Ifeel better I will change my wirte thank you, Llinda

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Just know that we are there with you,
never be alone, there are too many near,
Yours Ian.T xx

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So find more reasons to believe in others..

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