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No Silence

To me there is no silence,

The constant screaming voices in my head

Thoughts of revenge that plague my dreams

I see things that don't happen, I hear words that are never spoken

To me there is no silence, just the constant violence of life

Though I wish I could make it stop,

The crescendo rises ever higher

It overwhelms me, I cannot cope

The chaos inside my mind, a fire

To me there is no silence,

My mind is a storm, a raging sea

Though I try to escape, I'm surrounded

And I can't help but feel such agony


To me there is no silence,

My only solace is in my tears

My heart is broken, my soul in pain

No one hears me, my fears

To me there is no silence,

The constant screaming voices in my head

Thoughts of revenge that plague my dreams

I see things that don't happen, I hear words that are never spoken

To me there is no silence, just the constant violence of life.

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