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'never mind....i found them'

Submitted by Esker on Wed, 2017-03-29 01:00

the door shuts
and I forgot what it is
I'm looking for

..

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jane210660

Wed, 2017-03-29 07:39

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Happens to me several times a day.
In both a literal sense and a metaphysical one.
Jx

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Geezer

Wed, 2017-03-29 11:18

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something I can relate to/1 Short, sweet and to the point. Which was.....? LOL ~ Gee.
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Wed, 2017-03-29 12:01

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my guess :)

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Esker

Wed, 2017-03-29 17:48

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everyone gets it....just a stretching of the imaginative figments
that create poetry...
like a gust of wind...

my fave poem of mine in a year

thanks!

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lovedly

Thu, 2017-03-30 00:27

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esker is it from you
once i lost the keys
know what I did do
tell me
before I do

Eumolpus

Thu, 2017-03-30 21:59

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Despite the desperate sadness we all have about Bill Cosby, he did have some good comic moments.
In an early stand up he describes leaving the sofa to go to kitchen for something..when he gets there he forgets why he went...asks his eyes to see what is was, asks his brain, asks his legs, his nose for some clues, to no avail. When he returns to the sofa as soon as he sits he remembers. The moral: whenever this happens just pinch yourself in the ass!

Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

Esker

Thu, 2017-03-30 22:08

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bill cosby...a sexual deviant
im sure the KKK uses him
as a poster child
(I knew of then years ago a grand wizard
due to fbi surveillance of this site I cannot
mention which state)
No one says deviants are not brilliant nor
entertaining....
frankly I despise them...be they of brother
sister power trip sadists
etc....
all I know is the people i knew who were
the brunt of these people told me of the
jail stories and what happens sometimes
in the event of riots to such happy clever
smarter then everyone saps...
but
if I pinch myself next time I will imagine
it to be Bill....with an extra pudding
and then I will imagine about ten of my
bad ass friends with sharpened spoons

hey hey hey...

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Keith Logan

Mon, 2017-04-03 14:09

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I never argue about what I may have said, even though it makes no sense. I must have said it, or something near enough to be misconstrued. So I give my sweetest smile and get on with the rest of my life. Good haiku, of the humorous variety. ( I do enjoy haikus much more when they raise a smile).

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scribbler

Mon, 2017-04-03 15:05

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Where the heck is my damned pen?
I know that it is near somewhere
But I've searched through both dell and fen
become as grumpy as a bear

I look throughout this blasted land
.....oh......it's in my hand...................

Esker

Mon, 2017-04-03 18:04

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:)

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