the theme and your rhyming was good until you hit the lines: " something is seriously wrong " and victim lashed by judge's tongue". The pattern or pacing could be better, add or subtract a few words here and there. All in all, a very good start to a poem that a lot of people will identify with. ~ Geezer

I get the sense of injustice that someone should be paid for committing robbery

I think a full re-write is in order. Sure, start with being accused of namby pamby,
but then go straight to the intent of robbery,
then when injury is incurred thereby
blame the insurance vultures.

Just my thoughts.

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