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Mermaid

glittering
the tail dreams
sated with salt
the bitter sea
taste
from scales
to gooseflesh
damp permeations
like a wave froth
captured in the dimples
and resting on the
upper lip
submerged and risen

depth promise
swells
damp valley
runs
alive in sunlight
sequined

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"the sound in
sated with salt
 the bitter sea
 taste"

and of course the images and the last few lines
If you only consider some punctuation, it would just be really great! 

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tis lovely ur imagination
beyond clouds of normalcy
a great metaphorical poet
you still be

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