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the tail dreams
sated with salt
the bitter sea
from scales
to gooseflesh
damp permeations
like a wave froth
captured in the dimples
and resting on the
upper lip
submerged and risen

depth promise
damp valley
alive in sunlight

Editing stage: 


"the sound in
sated with salt
 the bitter sea

and of course the images and the last few lines
If you only consider some punctuation, it would just be really great! 


Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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instead of the we of readers
the pleasure of poetry
its craft wake to merge in
and swiftly swirl imagery
imagination and depths
brought forth with its

this magic of the craft

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tis lovely ur imagination
beyond clouds of normalcy
a great metaphorical poet
you still be


with this work of mine
and at this Beautiful place
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