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MASK

MASK
Where are the movers and shakers
the promises of better things
Where are the friends
where did the family ties go
who are these faces new
these bullies and these takers
who are these cannibals
feasting on my soul.

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So many questions but unfortunatelly no answes. A good capture of this unmarciful life.

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Apart from what this is saying,
well not entirely,
it is a very well worded poem in my opinion;
as I see it was for Rula too.

Good show Joe, love Anni

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

Takk, min Anni

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