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Magic

Waves cascade against the shore
relaxation to my very core
always leaves me wanting more
the sea to me, is never a bore

Whispers from sea shells
Wafting by, sea smells
casting a magic spell
my heart and soul swell

Sitting here is just bliss
enjoying sea air's sweet kiss
not a moment I want to miss
Feels like paradise, this

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Structured: Western
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thanks a million ephraim for reading and commenting Sueb x

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I agree with Eph with a little pruning this will run true ..
nice to read you again

Hugs Jc x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

thanks Jc
hugs back x

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