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M0RNING WAYS

MORNING WAYS

When shadows gray
and blue melancholy
cross my brow
as morning strikes
and I awake
I wonder how
many ways
I can break
this evil spell

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A piece of awe,.
That you wake is a blessing, it means that you still have much to do, just ask what the tasks are, but maybe you already know the things you have to do..
A Good write glad that you awoke to a new day, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

another 'soulful' write from you. You always capture the mood so well!
Regards

Bonitaj

Thanks for that ,my friend.

joe

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yesterday
i composed a wonderful poetry
on tomorrow will come
but sad to say
you may or may not stay etc

i forgot to save it
they rushed me mad
i'd forgotten the title even
now you remind me
i shall recompose
twill come back to me
thanks Gerie

loved

:)

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and posted
do see

loved

A perfect piece of verse, not a word of excess or out of place. In just nine lines and twenty six words you present feeling with imagery, dilemma and hope. Quite extraordinary.

cheers,
Jess
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