Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
l u n c h b o x x
pin hinge
tin ridge
rain drums
sweet air
wild hair
outside the house
lair
twist pretty stars
no stares
thoughts and being
no analyze the feeling
no Ju Ju dream stealing
got all the bits and peices
memories
folded full of creases
love in a box
left open
no breaking the locks
Editing stage:
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.
User login
Author information
Region & Country
north ontario
Favorite Poets
Klo, .., Ida, .., Rhiannon1010, .., Pleiades, .., Valryianne, .., Ester, .., Stephanie, .., Emina Smajevic, ..., Elefentee, ..., Sommer Lyn, ..., Jasmine, ..., Rula, ...
Other recent work
Active Workshops & Contests
Contest
Workshop
- Splash Pool: How to use imagery in poetry..
- Wading Pool: Neopoet How To Video Resources
- Olympic Pool: Earn A Poem Workshop 2
- Olympic Pool: Earn A Poem Workshop 1
- Plunge Pool: Stream Workshop
Comments
Esker
Thu, 2012-07-26 23:15
past the slurry car thunder
a sun gone for memory
the rain pressing through
to wander in the mountians
a house sleeping
a tin of life
all that is
the memory garden
the conjure touch
like a sea in a conch
stars when the clot
of clouds frees
the night
freshness dripping
in the dark
alive and timeless
safe for remembering
for feeling
for letting the hurt out
author commentpleiades
Fri, 2012-07-27 05:37
kick arse last three lines...
kick arse last three lines... (OMG!)
"no Ju Ju dream stealing"...words baby, straight to my heart
i've sat here, trying to find to gather the thoughts in my
mind...can't do
i can only say, i absolutely love this, w...
...and i feel every word
always,
your m
x
Esker
Sun, 2012-07-29 00:30
wake from the muddy mire to stand astride the stare of tommorrow
Dear M
gathered up the soft round ways
the hued and shattered sun pressed days
a cold deep blue
where against the ride of there
can be found our Now
Ju Ju hunger days
and how I dream
lonely and uneven
but not unkempt
the cut of love reaching
through the wounds
breaching the weight
careless and thick
and I stumble
your Ghost unwinding
the wraps
How you touch me
beyond the pain
an exquisite beauty
to the haunted ache
... always Your W
author commentpleiades
Fri, 2012-07-27 05:42
just read it again...
just read it again...
you are such an honest writer
.
Esker
Fri, 2012-08-03 22:08
Inter Changez
Babe cakes
how it is
I write
thinking I can
the terrible horror
of living
in the shadow
the fear and love
of the light
disputed
disrupted
and tenderly formatted
in my heart
in my soul
this special
impression
only you babe make
author comment