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JOURNEY--updated

Submitted by Geremia on Mon, 2012-08-27 13:33

JOURNEY
I think it’s time
you find your way
to my front door.

Things aren’t the same
as they were before.
Today is suddenly tomorrow
and each day is
one more borrowed.

No wondering.
No guessing
No playing the odds
anymore

Yes.
I think it’s time
you take me
home/

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Sat, 2012-09-01 18:41

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Like the piece but not the theme, the days will pass without tempting them to move faster or slower.
A winter comes to all of us as you are aware, so let us not worry about that time as yet.
You have many more words to put together for us to read, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Geremia

Sat, 2012-09-01 20:19

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Yes. I feel that I do have many more words to write. Thamk you for your encouragement, Ian.

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Ian.T

Sun, 2012-09-02 03:38

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Now let's say no more, and just get on with it. LOL
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Geremia

Sun, 2012-09-02 03:48

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:)

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