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It Didn't Rain!

It didn't rain.
So black and heavy
Are the clouds.

It didn't rain.

So thirsty is the land
And pale the lane.

It didn't rain.

The soul's crying,
Seeking cleansing
From the pain,
But
It didn't rain!

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Welcome back Rula

use of rain as a metaphor nicely used..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

dear raj.
Appreciate it highly.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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Hello Rula.
Great poem, so sad.
I like the repeated pattern. I worry you may cause a flood if you pray.
I want to re post your lines on Instagram. Ok?

IRiz

Dear IRiz. I feel really honoured.
You have my permission.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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thank you very much Rula for detailes
how to preview yours and other potential submission look for my last blog here on Neopoet

IRiz

Wow!
Your comment means a lot:-)

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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It's poetry like this that inspires me to keep writing.
I love it.

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