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Just Imagine With Me ( A triolet)
Imagine Palestine free!
Imagine its land's not defiled!
Imagine me breathing its sea!
Imagine Palestine free
And its children live cheerfully!
Imagine us never having been exiled!
Imagine Palestine free!
Imagine its land's not defiled!
Yet we're winners anyways, we'll be paid back the price
We fight, we might restore our land or not- that's fine.
For we might be martyrs then win the paradise.
We're winners anyways , we'll be paid back the price
But never shall the bad guys win, never shall the mice.
For Palestine we live and die. 'We're Palestine'
We're winners anyways we'll be paid back the price
We fight, we may restore our land or not- that's fine.
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Structured: Western
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Mon, 2024-04-29 22:20
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tyro
Tue, 2024-04-30 12:46
Hi dear Rula
I do imagine with you. The poem has great power when read with the heart, and feeling the caring goodness in you I do read it with my heart.
Tyro
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The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
Rula
Tue, 2024-04-30 13:10
Hello dear tyro
I do appreciate it once for reading this one and twice for reading it with your heart which makes it a triple appreciation and it's never enough.
Thank you.
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author commentLavender
Tue, 2024-04-30 16:35
Just Imagine With Me
Hello, Rula,
Thank you for this unique poetry form. I've learned so many different, wonderful forms from you. This is fantastic, and I'd like to give it a try sometime. Like Tyro, I also imagine this with you. May a Free Palestine come to be.
Thank you for this beautiful, hopeful poetry.
Lx
Rula
Tue, 2024-04-30 16:45
Hello dearest Lavender
It's my pleasure to know you've enjoyed this one. I'll be patiently waiting for your triolet. I'm sure you'll excell as always!
Thank you for giving the time and hope your moving goes well dear.
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author commentLavender
Tue, 2024-04-30 16:51
Thank you, Rula!
Moving is a chore, but this past weekend I broke my foot, which has added to the task. I may not be online as much as usual, but I'll still dash in and out as much as I can.
Much love to you!
Lx
Rula
Tue, 2024-04-30 17:08
Oh dear!
I'm sorry to hear about your broken leg.I hope it's not a serious one and wish you a quick recovery
Please take much care of my dear Diana:)
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